Feedback from treatment

We had to present our treatments to our teachers showing the concept and ideas we had come up with for our music videos. This was the feedback we received from our teachers: 

 

Hey Hey;

 

-       It is hard to make a 70s themed club, we need to put our focus towards the people in the club and what they are wearing. 

-       There are a lot of 70s aspects and a lot to make up 

-       The 70s bedroom was approved and they though it was a good idea, the club if used needs to be dressed up like a night out. 

-       It may be hard to cast the lead singer as he sounds a lot older then the people we have to hand. 

-       In order to film this correctly we would need it to have a touch of comedy through the 1970s,  but while also being serious, glitter band, and sweet. 

-       The song was a good choice and it had a pub rock band 

-       If 70s club was used the choice of costume and casting would be key 

-       The idea of using slow motion was good 

 

I know you know 

 

-       It will be difficult to have lots of cubicles perhaps three at most.

-       If used the drummer using pencils as drum sticks would only last tops 5 seconds. 

-       The main singer would have to be performing when singing in the office. 

-       When all playing the room would have to have blue lights in it.

-       The office concept might be a bit expensive to do. 

-       A good idea would be to have the lead singer in a cubicle loosing his mind so that he breaks through the cubicle walls into the performance room. 

-       A drone would need to be used for certain shots.

-       It is a very good idea however we don’t have the right facilities to create the image planned. 

-       A good idea to have would be to have the workers in stalls with hospital drips. 

-       We must make the office scene more metaphorical.